3 hours ago, David Ross said:Yikes I'll check with the editor tommorrow
Along with the 11 c beer in the batter, you might wish to mention the 21 t ginger in the salad as well.
The batter sounds like a good tempura recipe I recently used, but it called for seltzer water instead of beer. Yours sounds more flavorful.
ETA - There are also two separate mentions of 1 T sliced green onion in the salad ingredients and nothing in the instructions for a divided use of them.