Hi Wendy, I understand your frustration! I enjoy writing but when it comes to anything artistic, like plating or decorating I can never ever get it to come out the way I imagine and it really puts a damper on the whole experience! I think the thing to do is just to take a step back and realize that as long as it tastes good it all turns out in the end. Some suggestions for your copy would be to use more action words and adjectives, to try to get people interested instead of worrying about getting every ingredient in- make sure to highlight what makes them unique but let the servers descibe them in detail if needed. For example: Cookie Basket choose your favorites from a variety of cookies (chewy oatmeal, classic chocolate chip..) baked fresh daily. Frozen Vanilla Bean Soufflé Enjoy an ice-cold vanilla parfait resting on a swirl of chocolate and caramel, complimented by a wafer-thin almond tuile. It is definitely harder than it looks! Good luck.